Jay

Jay Williams Productions

weak

Hey jay, this song has some problems, the melody is weak and the lyrics are quite plain. The instrumental arrangement is good in terms of balance and it provides a solid enough accompaniment but it needs to be a bit more varied and interesting for a great es impact.Golden Ticket reviewed by Tucan hits

disconnected

The song is a little cringe to hear sometimes. The vocal is good, but the rhythm makes it sounds dragged, and after a while is too much. The melody doesn’t develop, and when it changes a little, seems disconnected from the rest.Golden Ticket reviewed by Jessica Whoa